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  • Sales copy help – “Do NOT Claim the Shame” Membership for Career Women

    Posted by Karen on January 23, 2022 at 6:54 pm

    Hi Mastermind Friends,

    I’m finally getting the guts to launch my membership and Alpha is on the schedule for 2/1. I’m looking for constructive feedback on my sales copy and of course please let me know if you would like to be an affiliate! I had to cut and paste the copy as the forum won’t allow me to attach a document for whatever reason. The formatting is thus not accurate. If you would like me to send the copy to you with the correct formatting, please let me know.

    “Don’t Claim the Shame” Survivor Membership for Career Women
    Finally, make peace with what happened and develop closer, more loving relationships

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    Dear Trauma Survivor,

    I’m in a pretty good spot lately with my own trauma wound healing. It is something I study about and work on most days.

    Many women healing from their child abuse histories don’t know how to feel better and end up feeling beaten down.

    Maybe this is you right now…I know that was me for a long time.

    I somehow managed to see each hurt as a learning experience. I don’t claim this to be easy.

    Sometimes you hit a plateau (more like a brick wall) with your healing journey, then you figure something out, and you “break through” and keep making progress.

    But what happens when you keep messing up? When you don’t feel safe, emotionally stable, or disconnected from the people you are supposed to feel closest too?

    You feel like you’ve solved it…or pushed it far enough down…

    You’re on your way now…

    Then…the same issues crop up…

    And you might end up questioning yourself wondering: “What’s wrong with me?”

    You’re not the only one that had that thought.

    For the longest time ever…

    I had these thoughts too.

    or more accurately in my subconscious, there was a dark voice,

    “I deserve to suffer.”

    Well, no wonder why I really struggled. No wonder success didn’t come easy at first. I made a lot of mistakes. Especially in relationships. You may feel a bit overwhelmed right now, so let me sit your mind at ease with a little bit about my own struggles. I grew up in a dysfunctional, misogynistic, abusive home. I remember the day when everything changed for me.

    I was miserable from being abused, neglected, being called every name in the book, treated as an object, thrown around, beat, and belittled. I claimed the shame and the shame ran deep. I attempted suicide on generic Tylenol. I woke up confused and pissed off. Why did I survive? I was tired of the emotional pain and wanted it to stop. I needed hope and so I pursued hope wherever I could find it. It was these experiences that led to my discovery of learning wholeheartedly that my life has value. I have a purpose and I need to share my voice with the world.

    “I wonder if there’s a trauma recovery program I can use to put an end to my suffering? “The suffering of other women?”

    Maybe there’s a recovery program I can develop that understands and addresses all the ways trauma impacts women?

    Then and there I realized I was searching for a “holistic trauma recovery program”. Something that I used to achieve the results I have today…and something that’s working for my therapy clients.

    I looked at myself in the mirror and said: “Listen, Karen, this is your shot of escaping this pain!

    Master this and you finally end the struggle.

    Miss the mark and you’ll end up right back where you were.”

    So, I started burning the midnight oil to learn everything there is about trauma recovery!

    Because of that I realized two things:

    1. When it comes to healing your trauma wounds, you need to have an empowering trauma recovery plan in place…

    …and break that plan into a few crucial (yet easy to follow) steps. Just make sure that these steps aren’t based on misguided information that well-intended friends who don’t understand what happened and how complex your wounds seem to be. Maybe they told you, “forget about it, it’s in the past.”

    They believe avoiding your triggers, or trying to forget the past, is the way to go. And maybe you share this belief…

    I know I did for a long time.

    However, this couldn’t be further away from the truth.

    In fact, my “holistic trauma recovery program” works so well towards helping you heal your trauma wounds, because it completely disregards this myth.

    2. My trauma recovery progression has completely changed my life. Your life can change too. Where you used to struggle to manage your emotions, you can finally find your relief…and even add hope.

    You may know where this is headed:

    I set out to give my clients the same experience I’d had: a focused and healing trauma recovery program with a single purpose:
    Taking you by-the-hand, and leading you, step-by-step, throughout your journey. No more going it alone.

    The program would have to be a coaching program delivered to you .

    I had to make sure that you could tolerate it…feel empowered by it…

    …anyone could go through it in just 20 minutes a day…

    …and experience stellar results.
    This became known as “Don’t Claim the Shame” Survivor Membership for Career Women

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    And it WiLL become the most popular trauma recovery program around.

    Here is an example of the feedback we got from a past trauma survivor and client:

    DP from Virginia:

    ” Working on my trauma timeline and telling my story empowered me and showed me the areas of my life I need to heal.” “While working with Karen, my glucose levels stabilized, I had less chronic pain, and I stopped beating myself up.”

    When I first developed my “holistic trauma recovery program”…

    …something that ended up being one of my biggest career breakthroughs…

    What if there were a program that really wanted your suffering to end? To help you stop carrying around shame? Would you experience more peace?

    So in order to ensure that you too will experience the same transformational results I did…

    …I managed to organize everything in an easy-to-follow coaching program.

    Think of it as if you have me right beside you, coaching you as you progress through your journey.

    We’re also making some outlandish claims:
    One of them would be: “We’ll make healing your trauma wounds easy as Sunday morning”

    Okay I agree, that may be going a little far. I can say if you commit to yourself, do the bite size assignments, your distress will SIGNIFICANTLY reduce.

    How come we can say that?

    Because I went full Sherlock Holmes for years on end in order to solve this trauma recovery mystery. No, it isn’t completely solved. Why? WE LEARN MORE ABOUT TRAUMA AND ITS IMPACT EVERY SINGLE DAY.

    After more than 24 years of studying trauma’s impact, I managed to discover how to compassionately heal your trauma wounds.

    And create a coaching program that puts you on the path to success.

    Thanks to this…I was able to learn two things:

    Breaking down everything into bite-size “nuggets” is a MUST if you want to truly succeed at healing your trauma wounds.

    Once you master this…

    …there’s nothing you can’t do when it comes to trauma recovery.

    In fact this is the most IMPORTANT thing to understand if you want to keep seeing constant results.

    This is exactly what I did with my “holistic trauma recovery program”…

    …and you’ll get to discover exactly how it will work for you…

    …over the next 12 months… or as long as you need…

    …so you can finally:
    Crush your shame and low self worth issues for good!

    Unlike turning to food, alcohol, drugs, or unhealthy relationships for answers, “Don’t Claim the Shame” Survivor Membership for Career Mothers is hyper focused on just one goal:

    Sending your trauma wound healing into overdrive by using my “holistic trauma recovery program” and transforming your struggles with shame and suffering into scandalous trauma recovery success!

    I used this exact plan myself, and everything about trauma recovery completely changed. I’d gone from what I would refer to as a struggling Trauma Survivor to the opposite. I could finally enjoy my healing journey too.

    So many people reached out to us and confessed that they were hitting a brick wall…

    …because of all of the endless streams of information out there.

    This is why I created “Don’t Claim the Shame” Survivor Membership for Career Women…

    So that women healing from their child abuse histories like you can cut through all the noise and focus on just one thing.

    And it takes just 20 minutes a day of your time to see results…
    …for one simple reason:

    Our program is a quantum-leap in trauma recovery…and we are going global. Never before has there been a virtual membership for women by women expanding the globe.

    …because it’s the only one that enables you to achieve interpersonal success in record time, without spending hours a day or costing you a fortune.

    In order to make sure you get the most out of “Don’t Claim the Shame” Survivor Membership for Career Women…

    I broke the whole thing into these fool-proof steps:

    community support
    bite size learning
    implementation plans
    self-discovery exercises
    tailored affirmations
    group coaching
    and much, much MORE

    And the best part?
    You’ll see results in as little as 90 days!

    Now, not all of us have a lot of time to invest in something like this.

    Everyone has their own thing.

    So, in order to ensure that you don’t spend hours on end doing this…

    …we managed to compress everything into tiny pieces of just 20 minutes a day.

    Shocking right?

    Just 20 minutes a day and you can make your dream of healing your trauma wounds into a reality.

    Now, I’ve been involved with trauma recovery for the last 24 years…

    …so I know it takes a little elbow grease and enthusiasm to get the results you deserve…

    …that’s why in the next 12 months I want to help only career women that are eager to achieve the goals they desire!

    I’ll take you by the hand and guide you every step of the way; from what you have to do to how long you have to do it for.

    And one thing I can promise you is that this is going to be easier than you think.

    Basically you’ll have me as your personal trauma recovery trainer for the next 12 months or more.

    Get this coaching program in THE FIRST 48 HOURS and you’ll receive a unique “Action-Takers” Only Bonus completely free!

    30 minute private coaching session with Karen to map out your recovery goals

    What’s The Alternative? Spinning Your Wheels In Place…

    There’s a lot of information out there. From Youtube videos to books and online courses.

    And if you’re like me, I’m sure that you can take all of that and use it on your own…

    However, sooner or later…you might feel like you’re running in place.

    So what happens next?

    You might feel beaten down or alone…

    And maybe even blame yourself because you can’t jump this hurdle.

    It’s like downloading a big photo with a dial-up internet speed. First, you get the image in low-resolution…

    …and, if you can stand a few feet away and squint at it, it looks pretty good.

    But then the image would gradually, row-by-row, enhance.

    By the end, you’d have a high-resolution image that looked good even close up.

    If you’re sharp, you’ve probably picked up two things:

    The first is that to find your relief is like downloading an image over a dial-up connection.

    In the beginning no matter what you do…

    …each step propels you forwards…

    …and you enjoy some results.

    Eventually, you reach a point where most of the easy wins are gone.

    This is where details matter…

    …and you now need to start paying attention to them.

    “Don’t Claim the Shame” Survivor Membership for Career Women was developed with one goal in mind:

    Help you fill in the blanks.
    Everything is structured in easy steps that build upon each other so you can experience results for a long period of time.

    All it takes is just 20 minutes a day.

    (That’s not an exaggeration: small wins every day can replace long and painful approaches, and often produce even better results, because you stay fresh and super-motivated.)

    But we’re closing the doors SOON… this all January 31st… and the Fast Action Bonus expires in less than 48 hours.

    To take advantage and claim “Don’t Claim the Shame” Survivor Membership for Career Women for yourself before time runs out…

    Simply click on the exclusive link below:
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    Until next time,
    Coach Karen, Founder & CEO
    Heal Thrive Dream, LLC.

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    Karen replied 12 months ago 4 Members · 8 Replies
  • 8 Replies
  • Kelly

    January 25, 2022 at 1:08 pm

    I need to see sales copy ‘on the page’ with design/images in order to digest it. Visual impact is as important as the words themselves – so please do share a page with us :) I’m happy to give video feedback when you do. (And wahooo for progress on this!)

  • Tishia

    January 25, 2022 at 10:15 pm

    Ditto what Kelly said – I need it on the page. I can’t comprehend all that without seeing images/formatting, etc. And congrats on moving forward and taking action to get this launched! :-)

  • Karen

    January 26, 2022 at 8:41 am

    @kelly Your post made my day! Goal is to have it up this weekend since I’m booked solid before then. I appreciate you so much!

    @tishialee Thank you too. I would love your eyes on it as well. The more help the better.

  • Kelly

    February 2, 2022 at 11:05 am

    @healthrivedream You gave us a link in the session on Monday but I didn’t save it – can you post here?

  • Jennifer

    February 2, 2022 at 11:51 am

    Karen shared with me – told her I’d look over it too.

    First glance is attractive, lots of nice pictures … BUT … need benefits-first, attention grabbing headline, page too long, break things up, buttons or something to call out the Calls to Action
    But I know we will all have some great suggestions and whip this into shape the way you did for mine. :-)

  • Karen

    February 2, 2022 at 9:23 pm




    I am ready for the brutal honest feedback! lol.

    Will work on making buttons, also working on affiliate email swipes, and automation e-mails to be dripped out after opt-ins. Rough drafts are done.

  • Kelly

    February 6, 2022 at 10:58 pm

    Ooof, I wish I could have gotten to this soooooner Karen!

    Sooo… this needs a do-over as a sales page.

    And… if I ever get a vote – I suggest a NAME do-over too. (Listen to my thoughts on this)

    Go ahead… tell me to kiss your behind. (LOL! Man sometimes I hate giving feedback!)

  • Karen

    February 7, 2022 at 4:42 am

    I’m very grateful Kelly that you and Jenn both took the time to provide feedback to me. I did my best to listen!

    I pulled an all nighter as I’m that eager to launch! I redid my sales page and made a video with questions. It is 11 minutes long but half that if you watch in double speed!

    I also did a walk through of my membership site (draft preview) so that anyone in our community can take a peek and consider being one of my affiliates.

    I realize now that I missed a couple of areas on the tour. I was worried abou the time as it is a longer video is 23 minutes. Again, watch at double time.

    For anyone wanting to see the sales page live (my VA has added logo and testimonials). It is a still a rough draft as we are changing the name of our program.

    We will be changing our URL too soon.

    Thanks everyone for the support.