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  • Jennifer

    Member
    February 2, 2022 at 11:51 am

    Karen shared with me – told her I’d look over it too.

    https://www.donotclaimtheshame.com

    First glance is attractive, lots of nice pictures … BUT … need benefits-first, attention grabbing headline, page too long, break things up, buttons or something to call out the Calls to Action
    But I know we will all have some great suggestions and whip this into shape the way you did for mine. :-)